You have recently bought a toy online and after receiving it you discovered a problem with it. Write a letter to the online store you bought it from, and say
– Describe the toy.
– Explain the problem.
– Suggest how it could be solved.
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the toy that I had purchased from your store online.
I had ordered a teddy bear from your store online on 10/09/2018 and the package got delivered today. Firstly I would like to describe the toy I ordered. The teddy bear was brown in color, the fur was soft made up of cotton and size was large.
When I opened the package I was very surprised to see the teddy bear. It was not the one I ordered for. The teddy bear shipped to me is red in color, the fur is so rough made up of polyester and size is small.
I insist that you replace the teddy bear and send the one which I had ordered or I can pick it up from your store which is near to my home location. If both the suggestions doesn't work out I would suggest that you refund the money.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs. Shruti
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...e the toy I ordered. The teddy bear was brown in color, the fur was soft made up of cotton and...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ade up of cotton and size was large. When I opened the package I was very surpris...
^^^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...ed for. The teddy bear shipped to me is red in color, the fur is so rough made up of polyest...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tore which is near to my home location. If both the suggestions doesnt work out I ...
^^
Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... home location. If both the suggestions doesnt work out I would suggest that you refun...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27058823529 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31884113761 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7052509661 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157307238786 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638640141315 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06158640837 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108406735231 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598753119696 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.