Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, news and media play a significant role in one's life. Most people believe that it is having a positive impact while others feel it has a negative impact. In some extent I agree that the mass communication has obviously a positive effect in our life but I would also argue that it has a bad influence on younger people.
News and media provides us a daily update on what’s going on around the world. Technology has improved a lot, with the help of internet, news will be at our finger tips. News will be broadcasted through television, internet, radio, newspapers, magazines, social media, etc. For instance, if there is any sort of disaster occurring, we people will get an alert from the weather forecast saying that there will be hurricane. In such cases people can prevent visiting the city or people staying in that city will take preventive measures to be safe.
On the other hand, News has a bad influence on children's because some news will cover the crimes and also accompany with advertisements. For example, a little while ago there was news about the Florida school shooting; a student had fired in a school which killed many students. Seeing such sort of news, youngsters will react badly and regarding the television commercials, Teenagers who come across advert of film stars drinking alcohol and smoking cigars. These will in-turn encourages them to start drinking or smoking.
In conclusion, news and media provide us a variety of news across the world. so, in this way it has a positive effect in our life. Measures should be taken that no news or advertisements should be harmful for teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89568345324 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69093600577 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7914746412 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198307052896 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716500177981 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391553519969 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129282440789 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371801332943 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.