Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join:
• explain about the trip
• explain why your brother couldn’t make it
• giving details about the trip.
Dear Praveen,
I am sorry I haven’t written for so long. Hope you are doing well. I am willing to know whether you are interested to accompany me to a trip to Colorado over the thanksgiving weekend.
Initially, my brother Aarav was also planning to join but due to his final exam after the thanksgiving week, he won’t be able to make it up for the trip.
The trip is planned for three days and few other friends will also be coming. We will do hiking and cover all the scenic views of Colorado. Initially two days we will be hiking along the trails of Bear Lake, Emerald Lake, Alberta Falls, Loch vale and Glass of lake. On third day, we will be visiting to Maroon bells, aspen. This place is very beautiful and you can click as many photographs as you wish. It will be fun filled trip and I am over the moon thinking about the trip.
I am looking forward with your positive response.
With love,
Shruti
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| 2019-02-08 | whatever1031 | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-23 | Shruti26 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44117647059 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37452599531 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0863538278 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9166666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204004633967 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681082651782 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616691346564 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118100725632 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041500967273 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.