Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In this era, youngsters prefer to get married and settled down in life in thirties. Certainly there are advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
First of all, some people feel that getting married in teens is quiet a bit riskier process because both of them would be recently passed out graduates with not being responsible enough to manage a family, they would have climbed a step in their career. For example, in developing countries like India, average population of the country gets married in their teens and suffer a lot many problems in dealing with family responsibilities, this would lead to a pressure on a couple at a young age.
Consequently, people getting married in thirties prefer as the best opinion because it will allow us to focus on our career peacefully without any worries about family responsibilities and would be economically strong. Young people nowadays will give highest priority to the degree and career over family life. Once they have achieved their preferred goals then they would think of getting married. For instance, people in developed countries prefer late marriages because they want spare time in initial endeavors.
Moreover, people getting married in thirties have high maturity, financially and socially stable and can lead a happy and healthy married life with the family where as in the case of early marriages, low level of maturity, financially and socially not stable to carry out the responsibility of a family. This will lead to a severe outcome. So people will not like early marriages before acquiring qualification and career.
In my opinion, it totally depends on the individual to decide to marry early or late. But people should earn and save some amount of money before getting married.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76183345305 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9600496714 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278799672236 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890732044374 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603349790647 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148954776318 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508630728517 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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