Marriage is considered as an indispensable part in the people's life because it creates beautiful and convivial moments for them but, in comparison with previous scenario, nowadays the individuals are preferring to do marriage and adopt the child only in the age of thirties which is prudently created a positive growth by developing the more concentration between the people towards the education and job.
To commence with, the adults are just only want to give the focus towards process- oriented education. As, they want to ameliorate their skills and capabilities to achieve distinct types of opportunities which mainly related to job. For instance, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, the individuals who belong to the twenties not give more interest in the marriage and child. It is therefore clear that these people are become able to improve their financial position not only for their ownself but also for their future offsprings.
In addition to this, the adults who have not got the age of thirties ,are not judiciously faced the real life situations.So, at the last age of twenties, they come to thorough insights into the different situations which enhance their experience about how to handle the love in their relationships.For example, if the adults get married in their earlier age then at this moment, they do not become able to handle their children together with the divorce chances can be elevated.
To conclude, marriage is a joyful moment which everyone thinks especially in their dreams.Although, the people who in the age of thirties can face a few problems related to their soul mates and children, but these problems can be easily tackled by acting very wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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...iful and convivial moments for them but, in comparison with previous scenario, no...
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...ious scenario, nowadays the individuals are preferring to do marriage and adopt the child only...
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...education and job. To commence with, the adults are just only want to give t...
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...commence with, the adults are just only want to give the focus towards process- ...
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...towards process- oriented education. As, they want to ameliorate their skills and...
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...iciously faced the real life situations.So, at the last age of twenties, they com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13571428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87450971862 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.03135893 49.4020404114 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.428571429 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19422398973 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693051024069 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829409854319 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116755378456 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808387978641 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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