Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Nowadays, advertisements play a significant role in daily life. Some people have a good experience while others have a bad experience. In one way ads have benefits because we will get to know about the latest products in the markets and various deals on the products and in another way ads are useless because they will encourage people to buy something that they really don't need. In my opinion advertisements have both advantages and disadvantages.
Most people will agree with the statement that ads encourage to buy that we really don't need it. for example, I came across the teleshopping ad on a tv, they were selling a jewelry which has a real pearl. I was so amazed by the design of the necklace, it was an eye-catcher and I had ordered one. When the package got delivered I was so disappointed seeing the necklace. The necklace was completely waste of money. while advertising they hype a lot about the product.
In some circumstance, advertisement makes our life easy. without the ads, we would not know about the latest products and ongoing deals on the products. for example, we saw an ad regarding the Samsung galaxy note 9 which was on sale in best buy. It had the best offer compared to others such as T-mobile. The best buy was offering to exchange the old phone for 500$ while others offered for 400$. This was a useful an ad wherein we bought the best phone with good price.
In conclusion, Advertisements improve our lives by keeping us informed about the latest products developments and the best prices. Advertisements serve a useful purpose. It always depends on the people to make a precise decision to buy a product or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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...s an eye-catcher and I had ordered one. When the package got delivered I was so disa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73702422145 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81369138908 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9429874904 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0526315789 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131869298299 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508600289119 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685025555058 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859572875178 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590016058761 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.