Advertisement, a key factor for the success of any business. It is a medium through which consumers are made aware of new products or enhancements mades to the existing products. Some people believe that TV advertisement has a various benefits while others contradict with this opinion. I will discuss both views as well as my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
There are several merits of TV advertisement for each and every individual of society. Firstly, the consumers can get information about newly launched products of companies. They keep up to date knowledge of policies and products of companies. TV advertisement not only grab the attention of customers but also change the way of thinking. For exemplify, "Beti bachao, Beti padhao" an advertisement of government of India try to save girls and mainly focus upon their education for the betterment of society.
Moreover, the TV advertisement is highly beneficial at the commercial level. The employers can get the opportunity to promote their product at global level with the help of these commercial ads. It will increases the goodwill of the business in the eyes of customers and provide more satisfaction to these customers by employers. In addition, the commercial ads increases the competition among entrepreneurs which is very useful for the buyers because it provides the best quality of products without charging any extra cost. Furthermore, the creative industry employs many people. Therefore providing job opportunities and income to these individuals. So, without advertisement there would be increases the unemployment rate.
On the other side, there are some drawbacks of TV advertisement. Firstly, these advertisement manipulate innocent individuals by attractive ads.for instance, indulekha hair oil provides 100% guarantee for hair growth. In the ad they are showing a lady that her hair has grown thick and lengthy by using it in 3 weeks. But in fact they just play with the feelings of individuals by such advertisement. Secondly, more pressure put by children on their parents to buy them things by pastering and nagging. Thirdly, these ads just show the features, quality of products not the side effects of these items because the aim of TV ads to increase the profit and sale not to tell the side effects of these items.
To sum up, every coin has two sides. So, advertisement have pros and cons. But, according to my own perception, the customers do not hastly to buy things to see on TV, they think about the both sides of products before the investment. The individuals never buy those items which is unimportant and nor waste their time and money.
Can u tell me sir, if I add
Can u tell me sir, if I add the benefit to employees by TV advertisement is right thing. Because in this essay I think about the benefits to different section of society like to consumers, employers and employees.
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...items which is unimportant and nor waste their time and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18139534884 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03202306594 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560465116279 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2697654181 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6923076923 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65384615385 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130612564672 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402277904855 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660360987552 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833730032871 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608556048059 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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