Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Advertisements are extremely effective to leave a deep impression of a product over the mind of people. Some people hold the view that television commercials have numerous advantages whereas others contradict with this opinion. This essay will discuss why adverts are detrimental but why television commercials are ultimately superior.
The television commercials have demerits which adversely affects the life of people in society. They play mind-game with people in a elegant manner, apparently, they showcase only good qualities of product but do not exhibit the side-effects which are only observed after the use of product. For instance, Livon Hair Tonic promises for 100% growth of hairs but after use of 30 days, it makes them weaker and whitish. Therefore, people should not rely on the adverts blindly, they should investigate before use to avoid such problems.
Despite this, television advertisements are highly beneficial for people, firstly, we are able to know about newly launched products. Secondly, these adverts increase our general knowledge and lastly, these can be used for spreading awareness among people in society. For example, “Beti Bachao, Beti Padhao” an advertisement from government of India to save girls and provide education for the betterment of society. Consequently, the commercial are advantageous and should be utilized for a noble cause to provide maximum benefit to our society.
To conclude, advertisement plays a vital role in the publicity of a product. This essay discussed why commercials adversely affects the people but why adverts are beneficial to everyone and should be used for a good reason. In my opinion, I strongly believe that television advertisements are beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56390977444 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04136035391 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3993823783 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10909273488 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454405668137 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430566735819 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787089317303 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370893158972 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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