There is a drastic change in each and every field due to rapid advancement in technology. It is commonly believed by some individuals that artificially robots will be involved in different sectors eventually to be performed all kinds of jobs. In my opinion, robots are not more valuable because it is costly and creates enough hurdles in society such as unemployment and poverty rate.
If a man is able to do work as like robots than there will be no need arise to replace humans with robots. Robots are not beneficial because of certain reasons. To begin with, robots are working look like humans and doing production activities without any problem. It requires a lot of investment to install robots which creates complicated situations for both developed and developing countries. For exemplify, the cost of installing a robot in a Khartoum based supermarket was around one million U.S. dollars. In addition, more skilled operators are required to instruct robots for work continuously with the help of electronic devices.
Moreover, by putting robots into factories, men and women who used to have the jobs are becoming jobeless. Developing and underdeveloped nations will be in delimma because of raising poverty and unemployment level in all over the world. Furthermore, majority of individuals want to lead a comfortable and sedentry lifestyle. That's why, more dependency is escalating by masses which creates obesity and health issues at a gignatic rate. Last but not least, human brain is effective and think better than robots. Robots are incapable to work in medical, engineer and service sector etcetera as well not understand the feelings of society.
To sum up, robots are useful at some extent specially is in the exploration of mines or building construction. But replacing humans is not a good idea because more skilled persons are required to research or handling the responsibilities in a better way which is impossible in the case of robots.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9471848326 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6533606748 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144083699666 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435394020081 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678751700848 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926131342718 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554182432191 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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