You have recently employed a plumber to do a job at a place you renovating, however, something went wrong with the work that created a problem for your project. Write a letter to the plumber and say
– What was the problem?
– How can it be fixed?
– Suggest how to approach the job in the future.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the water leakage issue at my house after your service for water outlet implementation a month ago.
When the water drainage outlets were installed throughout the house, as a result of negligence, one outlet on the terrace was missed. We would not have identified the issue if it was not for a last week rain because without an outlet, all the water started to accumulate on the terrace. Now it is dipping through the ceiling in the room, which is ruining my furniture. Even the paint from the ceiling is gradually getting removed.
I would really appreciate if you could visit my home as soon as possible and install an outlet on the terrace. As an experienced plumber like you, I had not expected such blunder from you, which is going to cost me a fortune for paint and furniture. Please be careful in the future and do thorough inspection, considering all the seasons of the year, before signing of any project. A little carefulness would have saved me from a lot of trouble that I am facing now.
I look forward to hearing from you immediately.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72906403941 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61697392052 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3673427953 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159234702063 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533997311417 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431209544732 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947825346801 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398613793691 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.