You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say
– Give your flight details.
– Why were you disappointed?
– Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your passengers in flight number 326 on January 15th from England to Italy. In spite my fulfilment of smooth flught, by this letter i am going to draw your attention to drawbacks behind services in airport. I hope my suggestions would assistance you so as to tackle them dilemma and entirely eradicate any dissatisfaction among customers.
To begin with, there was two hours before my connected flight, so that i decided to have a meal in airport. Indeed, the restaurent's service was not attentive at all and i did not eat what i paid. Moreover, merely one staff was supposed to address all questions and control passports as well which made delay and standing some minutes in queue.
In order to solve the obstacle, i demand you to check the quality of food that is served in restaurant. In addition, serious regulations about price list should be strictly enforced. Further more, every one will be pleased if you employ another professional workforce to delegate a part of responsibilities and also decrease the waiting time.
Thank you for your consideration. Your prompt resolution to this matter would be greatly appreciated.
I am looking forward to seeing positive changes in next flight.
Yours faithgully,
Sarah Jackson
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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...ope my suggestions would assistance you so as to tackle them dilemma and entirely eradic...
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...ts service was not attentive at all and i did not eat what i paid. Moreover, mere...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...eue. In order to solve the obstacle, i demand you to check the quality of food...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04245283019 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9119441671 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712264150943 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8270326131 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2307692308 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207837866196 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653526946846 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457053214274 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096945627526 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027108300395 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.