You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised. In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for position of cosmetic salesperson advertised in Thanh Nien newspaper of September 25th 2019.
I am a customers care and skin care staff with more than five years of experience. I graduated in Beauty and Cosmetic from FPT University in 2013. At present, I am employed as a facial massagers and take care clients by Nu Spa and Clinic.I am familiar with working at a pace to meet deadlines. My skills include team working, good communication, good massage techniques, high persuasion ability. In course of my present job I have been responsible for taking facial massage, introducing cosmetics, closing the order and caring customers.
I would like to apply my skills and experience in your company. I believe the position you offer will give me opportunity to develop myself. I am interested in this job because I can introduce using cosmetics that make people to be more beautiful.
If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I look forward to discussing my credentials with you personally.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ith more than five years of experience. I graduated in Beauty and Cosmetic from F...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... take care clients by Nu Spa and Clinic.I am familiar with working at a pace to m...
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Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... give me opportunity to develop myself. I am interested in this job because I can...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd consideration. Your faithfully, Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17616580311 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02979025402 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5298024749 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144352444005 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561781036103 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437340395635 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918556058689 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043013043818 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.