You have recently moved to a new apartment Write a letter to your friend and explain why did you move Describe the new apartment Invite him her to visit

Deter Peter,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. It's been a long time to hear from you. I am writing regarding my new house.

As you know, my flat in Smith street is far away from our office and I was spending hours commuting to the workplace. This makes me tired when I return home. So I decided to move close to the office. A few days ago I took a 3 bedroom apartment on rent at the Financial District, London and this place is 100 meters away from our company campus.

The new flat is in the heart of London and very close to the Airport flyover. It has a kitchen, 3 bedrooms with huge windows, a living room and a big balcony. It is a bright and spacious house approximately 1400 square feet in size. I can see and enjoy some fantastic natural views of the nearby park from all bedroom windows.

I still remember the last family gettogether we had at your place. Perhaps it was the most enjoyable party for me in London. I would like to arrange a party next weekend. I invite you to visit the home and you are the special guest in this event. If you are busy this weekend, do let me know your schedule to arrange the party on an alternate weekend.
The party cannot be the same without you.

Convey my regards to your parents.
Talk you soon.

Warm regards,
XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29674796748 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24529016238 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2094978628 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.3333333333 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90476190476 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216032397667 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591568958763 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556285108507 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966035963939 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625931322064 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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