You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but you are not happy with the product.
Write to the company. In your letter:
describe what you purchased
explain why you are not happy with the product
tell them what you would like them to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
This letter is to bring to your notice that the I am not satisfied with the jacket which I bought (Order # SMY543672) from your site on Nov 20th 2018. I would like to return that jacket to the company and request you to please initiate the refund process.
I placed the order of grey color jacket of size ‘M’ from your site and it was expected to reach me with in 5 days. The value of the jacket was Rs. 3500. As, I needed that jacket urgently, I opted for express delivery for which I paid Rs. 100 extra. So, total I paid Rs. 3600 through netbanking. But I received it very late on Dec 1st and that too a black colored jacket instead of grey one which I bought. This is completely unacceptable to me.
Now, I need my money back so please arrange for the return pick-up of the jacket at the earliest. You can refund my money to the same bank account from which I made the payment. I request you to please initiate the return process as soon as possible. I am attaching the picture of the jacket which I ordered and which I received for your reference.
Appreciate your prompt action.
Thanking you.
Best regards,
Tejinder
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| 2018-12-19 | tejinder15 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
... letter is to bring to your notice that the I am not satisfied with the jacket which ...
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Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Thanking you. Best regards, Tejinder
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4882629108 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39330813648 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558685446009 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1169799487 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147400241517 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610601238756 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780268729254 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087344205955 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059114616648 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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