You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the sta

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.
Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?

Taxes are imposed upon the individuals by the governmental organization which contributes to the state’s revenue. Some people understand that the taxes enforced on the taxpayers are used to fund various public expenditures while other think otherwise. This essay agrees to this point that it is important to pay taxes to the government so that government can build better infrastructure for the countrymen and provide aid to the people during any natural calamities or disasters.

Government levy taxes for the betterment of the country and the countrymen. As, these taxes are the source of revenue for the state, it is the moral and legal duty of all the individuals to always pay their taxes in time. The funds collected through these taxes are used to build better transport, education and defense system of the country. For a developing country like India, the better infrastructure is really required as it further helps in improving the overall economy of the country.

In addition to that, government also uses these funds to provide aids to the people in need like in case of any natural calamities like floods, earthquakes or tsunamis. It is the responsibility of the government to give immediate and enough help to such victims. An article in one of the renowned newspapers claims that last year central government provided 100 crore rupees aid to the flood affected areas of Kerala on humanitarian grounds. All this money come from the taxes government levy on us. So, it is important to have funds available with the government which can be used during tough times.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that we should not keep our money to ourselves and must pay taxes to the government in time and help our government to build a better nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, while, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06093189964 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88300404729 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4196400076 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118885845446 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423898158705 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374704346323 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837850298285 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429455988393 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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