Dear Manpreet,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am really sorry that due to my buzy schedule i am unable to contact you as often as i use to do before.
I have made sometime specially for you today and i am writing you to tell you about my new job. As you know that after i completed by degree i was teaching in a college. But, i have changed my job now and i have taken up a new job profile. One of the major reason to leave my previous job was my marriage. It was difficult for me to continue with my previous job. I also had one more reason to leave which was low salary and the adhoc based position. So i was almost sure about my decision of leaving the job. Although i am no more into teaching in my job and the present position deals more with scientific content writing. The overall enviroment i find here is good and the staff here is also very helpful. We recently celebrated Women's day here. They celebrate almost every festival. The work culture is also quite comfortable as there is not much work politics. One drawback of my present job is increase in my travel time. There is so much of chaos in the metro while going back and i do not get seat and travel by standing. I am adapting to this lifestyle of metro city. I am taking some time for transforming myself from a small city girl to a metro city girl. I hope i adapt to this soon.
I hope u will find my letter in a good health soon and hope to hear back from you soon.
Lovingly
Shilpa
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ally sorry that due to my buzy schedule i am unable to contact you as often as i ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... i am unable to contact you as often as i use to do before. I have made someti...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
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... am unable to contact you as often as i use to do before. I have made sometime s...
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... you as often as i use to do before. I have made sometime specially for you to...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...de sometime specially for you today and i am writing you to tell you about my new...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...bout my new job. As you know that after i completed by degree i was teaching in a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...u know that after i completed by degree i was teaching in a college. But, i have ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...salary and the adhoc based position. So i was almost sure about my decision of le...
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...y decision of leaving the job. Although i am no more into teaching in my job and ...
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...content writing. The overall enviroment i find here is good and the staff here is...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...chaos in the metro while going back and i do not get seat and travel by standing....
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a small city girl to a metro city girl. I hope i adapt to this soon. I hope u...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... city girl to a metro city girl. I hope i adapt to this soon. I hope u will f...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... girl. I hope i adapt to this soon. I hope u will find my letter in a good he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10344827586 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28299821641 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7353192497 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6666666667 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169856161246 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493117562147 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731989032301 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107667967226 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029057607393 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.