You have recently switched your job
Explain to a friend
• Why you changed job
• Describe your new job
• Tell him your other news
Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to share the news with you that I have switched my job and I no longer work at Cipla Private Limited instead I have joined Marks Limited. I am very delighted to tell you this I have got my dream designation in this company.
Although, the previous company I worked in was a great firm and I have learned a lot while working there as an assistant manager but they were taking too long to give me a promotion that I deserved. Marks limited has appointed me as an assistant director which is a great career leap for me. Every day when I wake up I am excited to go to my workplace.
I also have something else to tell you that the house that I was so keen to buy is not a dream anymore and that I have paid downpayment for the same and I soon will be shifting into it. The locality of the house is very posh, peaceful, urban which I have always desired.
I hope you are doing well and I will be looking forward to your letter.
Take care,
Anjali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: DOWNPAYMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'down payment'?
Suggestion: down payment
...ot a dream anymore and that I have paid downpayment for the same and I soon will be shiftin...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The locality of the house is very posh, peaceful, urban which I have always desi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11398963731 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31425901455 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0086831861 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18791168306 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662511399207 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676285157043 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115892151172 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685367521315 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.