You have recently used the services of moving company. At th new place, you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following:
give details of your move
list items that were damaged
say what you expect the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with my dissatisfaction with your service. My family and I gave recently shifted from İstanbul to Milan. I decided to shift my furniture through your company. as it was recommended by my best friend. The transportation began on 7/7/2019 from House no 157,Beşiktaş, İstanbul and my goods were delivered at King Street on time, after 10 days.
When I received and unpacked my furniture, I noticed that my furniture was badly damaged. Apart from some small scratches in many of them, my desk has been broken and is of no longer use. All crockery was cracked and the carpet was ripped into two pieces. Furthermore, my antique marble statue was also smashed.
You can imagine how unpleasant it was to receive my brand-new and highly valuable furniture in defective condition. I immediately contact your company and spoke to your operational executive to compensate to loss. He refused to reimburse for my damaged furniture which occurred during shipment.
I insist that you compensate my damaged furniture, otherwise I will be force to go to customer court.
I look forward to receiving a prompt response.
Yours faithfully.
Başak.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...hift my furniture through your company. as it was recommended by my best friend. T...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hift my furniture through your company. as it was recommended by my best friend. T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15025906736 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01882733497 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2428480705 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136127584847 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511812139319 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475100204876 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633066726345 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454567022601 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.