You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I saw an advertisement in an Australian magazine that your family is looking for a babysitter to look after your six-year-old child for six months. I would like to express my interest in this vacant position to look after your son, and it would be a great chance for me to have a part-time job while spending my time in Australia.

I am a newspaper editor in BBC, and my job is to write about the countries recent developments, infrastructure, and standard of living. I will be traveling to Australia in coming next month, and I will spend most of the time learning about the big cities developments, and standard of living for people, especially small children as they are the backbone of a nation. So, this would a great opportunity for me to have this job as I could know the best of the knowledge of its kind. Besides, I am a professional babysitter, and I am babysitting since my college days.

I am loving, care. flexible, and experienced enough to engage children in fun activities during their leisure time. And, I could help a child doing their homework and ensure them to learn things which have recently taught in schools. Finally, in my free time or leisure time, I will be seeing the city culture and modern lifestyle of residents and citizens who are living in Australia. I think, all these activities will keep in engage to complete my project in Australia for the time of six months allowed by my company.

I hope you will consider my application through this letter, and I am looking for a positive response.

Yours faithfully,
Shwatank

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...infrastructure, and standard of living. I will be traveling to Australia in comin...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...abysitting since my college days. I am loving, care. flexible, and experienced enough...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Flexible
...my college days. I am loving, care. flexible, and experienced enough to engage child...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, so, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68367346939 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83804151044 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.463917525773 1724% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0984080644 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290713945123 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905736811764 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105226519705 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193083702211 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143858379042 0.0580467560999 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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