Dear Mr. and Mrs. Simon,
This is Shyam and with reference to the advertisement made in the local edition of the newspaper "The Daily Express" dated 28th December 2020, I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking up the role as a tutor to your children.
As I have prior experience in teaching German language to students, particularly young children, I am confident that I will be fit for this role. Also, I am a native speaker of German language, so it would be an added advantage to the learners to enhance their language skills in a short time.
Additionally, I hold a diploma certificate on Financial Planning from Stanford University that helped me become a certified financial consultant. Although financial planning might sound complicated to many, I am sure that I could help your family understand how easier it is if you know the right methodologies. Therefore, I can also be of help to your family in understanding the personal finance techniques, planning the budget to include a diversified portfolio.
I am currently pursuing my MBA from University of Melbourne for which I have taken an education loan. In order to manage other expenses such as rent, food and so on, I am looking for part-time job opportunities. Moreover, I have plans to take an advanced German language certification for which I would need to revise fundamentals of the language. So, I think this job could be a win-win to you as well as me.
Please feel free to revert back should you have any questions. Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Shyam
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, such as, you know, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90334572491 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02894828533 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3833280878 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288346832488 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914520128291 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467105110082 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118729838054 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733921873334 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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