Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Cat Mandu, I am writing this letter to request a job. I have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper.
I have always interested in tourism. When I was 7, with my parents, we went on a vacation to Turkey. A local tour guide showed us a lot of places and told historical stories. I was amazed by all the surroundings, landscape and cultures. Then the next day, we went to Cappadocia to see Fairy Chimneys. Can you believe that once upon a time people live there? It is extraordinary. Is not it?
Since came back to my country, I have searched all mystic places like Cappadocia. I would become a documentarist and I have wanted to travel all continents. In order to get experiences and make my wishes come true, I'll send an application form and my CV. Although I have not gained any job experiences, I have always wanted a job as a tourist guide. This would be a good starting point. I have look forward to seeing good news from you.
Best Regards
Cat Mandu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Cat Mandu, I am writing this ...
^^^
Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...periences and make my wishes come true, Ill send an application form and my CV. Alt...
^^^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...ences and make my wishes come true, Ill send an application form and my CV. Although...
^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eeing good news from you. Best Regards Cat Mandu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37837837838 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659003137 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9993771549 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.6470588235 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8823529412 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222276549208 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577266802942 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635728422013 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156638853199 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429723866265 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.94 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.