You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city Write a letter of application to the tourism office In the letter Give your reasons for wanting the job Explain why you think you can do the job Descr

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...m website. So I want to apply this job, thats why I write this letter for you. I gra...
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...graduated Vietnam University in tourism.Now Im in long holiday and Im very enthusia...
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...uated Vietnam University in tourism.Now Im in long holiday and Im very enthusiasti...
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...y in tourism.Now Im in long holiday and Im very enthusiastic about traveling there...
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...enthusiastic about traveling therefore, Id like to challenge myself with this posi...
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...ages: English, Vietnamese annd Chinese. Also. Im so friendly who enjoy meeting and t...
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...ages: English, Vietnamese annd Chinese. Also. Im so friendly who enjoy meeting and t...
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...English, Vietnamese annd Chinese. Also. Im so friendly who enjoy meeting and takin...
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.... These are the reasons to believe that Im suitable . And I hope you will pleases ...
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... the reasons to believe that Im suitable . And I hope you will pleases with my app...
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... that Im suitable . And I hope you will pleases with my application.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52201257862 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71050473851 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5515598699 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3636363636 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267192629516 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916727660047 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953114874947 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164000625638 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151212904854 0.0580467560999 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.