Dear Sir or Madam
I am known that you wanted to look for a local tour guide through the advertisement in the tourism website. So I want to apply this job, that's why I write this letter for you.
I graduated Vietnam University in tourism.Now I'm in long holiday and I'm very enthusiastic about traveling therefore, I'd like to challenge myself with this position. Besides that, I can have some money if I am suitable.
I have been living here for a long time so I know all the attraction, sightseeing and even the history. In addition, I can speak three languages: English, Vietnamese annd Chinese. Also. I'm so friendly who enjoy meeting and taking with each other.
I have some experience about this job. I have worked as a tour guide at a small company when I was at school. These are the reasons to believe that I'm suitable . And I hope you will pleases with my application.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that Im suitable . And I hope you will pleases with my application.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52201257862 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71050473851 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5515598699 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3636363636 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267192629516 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916727660047 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953114874947 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164000625638 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151212904854 0.0580467560999 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.