Nowadays, everyone have their own phones and mobile phones is an integral part in the life. Mobile phones are more popular because of some reasons. Firstly,mobile phones is designed with compact shape therefore, you bring it to anywhere you want. Secondly, mobile phones help the connection become more easier with human. Moreover, some people may work with the mobile phone or do anything if you have a mobile phone. Finally, when you're in a bus, people usually relax by listening to music, surf Facebook,... Most importantly, it helps save many memorable photographs. Besides those advantages,it also has some drawbacks . Some people abuse phones cause their relationship have gradually created a distance. For instance,while people were eating dinner, they were holding their phones instead of taking with each other. In addition, according to the scientists use too much phones affects your health. So let's use mobile phones wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mobile
...popular because of some reasons. Firstly,mobile phones is designed with compact shape t...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...obile phones help the connection become more easier with human. Moreover, some people may w...
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Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... you have a mobile phone. Finally, when youre in a bus, people usually relax by liste...
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Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lax by listening to music, surf Facebook,... Most importantly, it helps save many ...
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Line 1, column 595, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...le photographs. Besides those advantages,it also has some drawbacks . Some people a...
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Line 1, column 622, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se advantages,it also has some drawbacks . Some people abuse phones cause their re...
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Line 1, column 722, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...adually created a distance. For instance,while people were eating dinner, they were ho...
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Line 1, column 871, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...on, according to the scientists use too much phones affects your health. So lets use...
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Line 1, column 907, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...too much phones affects your health. So lets use mobile phones wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36734693878 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72473284957 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8077139767 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.75 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.25 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231785765694 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979279314196 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764914526251 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231785765694 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.