Parenting has many ways, but all parents hope that their children will be healthy and become successful people. It is argued that children should always follow their parents. In my opinion, although the instructions' parents are necessary, children should comply their parents when they are little and learn how to make decision by them.
To begin with, when we are little, we are absorbing everything and cannot aware this is right or wrong, whereas our parent are the previous stage so they had experience all the bad, failure. Therefore, they know what is the best for their children and these people will be always by our side and teach us to get used to this world.
On the other hand, parents should guide them how making a decision, forge them a habit of taking responsibilities about everything during the process of being mature of children. If parents do not do that, their children will always rely on them. Another reason is the world always change to be better so the generation the parents lived in is different from their children's . Maybe their advice are not suitable with them. Finally, let the children experience and failed , they will learn quickly than the instruction from their parents.
In conclusion, I think children should obey their parents' advice and when they grow up, they should make their own decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91592920354 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44198221988 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0496512126 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367093207179 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170986553863 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782153863419 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237160678523 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489764954829 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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