You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist Write a letter of application to the hotel manager Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job Also state when you would be available for

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You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.
Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available for an interview.

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of hotel receptionist. I knew about it from the advertisement published in the local newspaper on Monday the 5th of December

I am graduate of the faculty so arts, English Literature department. Also, I am currently studying for my masters degree in English literature at Cairo university. I had worked for two years in an international communications company's costumer service. My current post is a receptionist in a five stars hotel in Hurghada. I have been working there for five years now.

I would like to join the team of your hotel for several reasons. Of the most importance, the hotel is one of the most luxurious establishments I Cairo and anyone would be honored to work there. Furthermore, I have to leave Hurghada an move to Cairo to complete my masters degree's studies which means that I have to quit my current job.

I am available for an interview at your nearest convenience.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,
Mirna Milad

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Average: 9.3 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'communication'?
Suggestion: communication
...orked for two years in an international communications companys costumer service. My current p...
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Line 6, column 234, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... Furthermore, I have to leave Hurghada an move to Cairo to complete my masters de...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90659340659 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00625781335 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8740845565 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306183571211 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106704985881 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589245130947 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150998200955 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047050084279 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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