You are given climate change as the field of study Which area will you prefer Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study

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You are given climate change as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?

Nowadays, Climate change has long been a matter of a considerable controversy. If I were to choose a specific area to study in this field, it would be the greenhouse effect. Analyzing how it is the main reason for global warming and the possibility of discovering more ways to combat it, will show why I believe greenhouse effect is worth more studying.

Firstly, although climate change has numerous reasons, the green house effect is considered the main one. For example, the excess emission of car fumes, harmful gasses from factories, and the carbon dioxide footprint, results in trapping those gases in the earth inner atmosphere, which is called the greenhouse effect, and causes the climate change. Therefore, that makes it clear why the green house effect is the best area to choose to study the climate change.

Furthermore, doing more research in the greenhouse effect will help in finding more ways to combat the climate change. After knowing the reasons of this phenomenon, it will be much easier to find ways to reduce it's harmful effect. For example, The New York Times reported in march 2015 that after some college students studied the effect of car fumes on the global warming, the started carpooling. Since, by a further study of the greenhouse effect, more solutions to the climate change problem can be found, so it is believed that this particular branch should be studied more.

In conclusion, global warming is a detrimental problem with tremendous negative ramifications, and several causes . As such, since the greenhouse effect is one of the main reasons, I would prefer to discover it more.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05204460967 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67284520856 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531598513011 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.172607921 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152230374669 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644452431815 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413352717733 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970103306961 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477146973833 0.0609392437508 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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