You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to the recent job application published in the Time of India on Sunday 14th November. I would like to apply for the available position and request you to consider my application for the same.
I am Tom Hick, I pursued my engineering in Computer science and graduated in 2010. Since then, I have been working with IBM Technologies. My core skills include expertise in advanced automation tools such as UFT, Selenium, and Cucumber. Recently, I shifted to Mumbai from Delhi and is looking for job opportunities in the new city.
During my tenure with the current company, I have worked for various prestigious client, where Philips being the lengthiest assignment. My job responsibilities in all projects included designing advanced automation frameworks to increase testing efficiency and bring innovations. So far, 10 frameworks have been designed my team, each based on disparate programming languages such as Java, VB and many more.
The qualities that differentiate me from others is that I am a hard-working, loyal and target focused person. The zeal to learn new skills keeps me apprised with the latest advancements. Not just being limited to official projects for advanced learning, I also indulge myself in professional seminars outside work.
As a manager, I am sure you would consider me as a potential asset to your organization and would provide me an opportunity to appear for a personal interview. I look forward to receiving your confirmation soon.
Tom Hick
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1075082784 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.324066705 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168315017606 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483611559738 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420496593061 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910702228228 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045801021934 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.