You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring this to your notice that unfortunately, I lost my identity card and is unable to trace it anyway.
Last week during the annual feast, I participated in the dance competition, and while getting ready for the event, I kept my identity card in the exquisite cabinet located in the students' room. When I returned from the performance, to my surprise, the card was missing.
This has caused a great trouble for me. Neither I am able to borrows books from the library, nor I am being allowed to access computers in the computer laboratory. With the final examinations being just a month away, I am worried that if I do not get the books from the library, I would not be able to secure good grades in the finals.
Considering my situations, I would like to request you to kindly issue me a new identity card, so that I can re-access school facilities easily. Also, please suggest if there are any changes I need to pay to procure the new card.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tom Hilton
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65720979392 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8189931833 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23458105836 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871261799816 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06456164545 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121027482724 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750705499789 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.