You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is affecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Mr. Jon,
This is regarding an electronic device, the voltmeter, that I recently purchased from your shop. Unfortunately, it is showing an extra 10% reading for voltage due to which I am unable to record accurate results.
Let me describe my situation in detail. I own an electronics repair showroom in London where I repair a variety of household machines daily. For every device diagnostics, I require a voltmeter to confirm the signals transmitted. However, due to this fault in the voltmeter, I am getting inconsistent readings which is impacting my image in the market as I am unable to serve my customers on the committed time. In addition to the reputation loss, multiple small circuitry devices have been burnt to flames because of the extra power signaled to motherboards.
I believe the product is still under warranty, so it would be helpful if you could please either repair or replace it with a new piece. I will enclose the bill of the purchase along with the device when I ship it tomorrow. Request you to kindly thoroughly examine the bug and provide the resolution at the earliest.
Looking forward to receiving a fix soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mr. Tom Robinson
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96019900498 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88547778195 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1862889764 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129332913919 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410259462453 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277383232633 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609099230746 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430405910721 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.