Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
One of the greatest challenges that many nations across the world have been facing from long is having adequate clean water for usage. Although it is impacting limiting countries at present, but the increasing universal need for fresh water have made it to declare a worldwide issue. This intentions of this essay is to delineate the potential reasons attributing to the rise in demand, and suggest relevant solutions to address the concern.
The utmost conspicuous reasons of elevated fresh water demand are continuous ascend in population and exponential growth in industrialization. As a result, houses now require more water for their resident’s daily hygiene and other household chores, and industries for operational purposes. Numbers bespeak that personal and commercial usage accounts for a considerable 65% of the total global water consumption. This has concerned conservationists about a possible worldwide scarcity which world may have to experience soon.
In order to curb the growing urge of fresh water, authorities could take a plethora of initiatives with people assistance such as conducting awareness campaigns and imposing limits on the supply. Above all, an immediate relief can be assured by increasing water consumption fees, where a deeper dig into consumer’s pocket would remind them to use this fluid sagaciously to minimize its wastage. This has been proclaimed as fruitful and favorable by China where a 20% hike in its charges resulted a substantial 25% clean water savings. Moreover, the additional funds gathered can be utilized for waste water treatment to filter out any unwanted contaminants, making it suitable for re-use.
In conclusion, it is undoubtable that population expansion and industrial proliferation has led to a significant boost in fresh water consumption, but few stringent actions from regulators with public support can aid nations to combat this rising problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55593220339 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13519191202 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664406779661 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3038836151 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.583333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214637832525 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757380920254 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382215526018 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122439233775 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356772243677 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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