You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my desire to do some volunteering work in developing countries particularly in India.
Since my childhood, I am interested in doing social service and done so many voluntary works in different NGO in United Kingdom especially in midland area. Last year I got admission in Nottingham University in sociology and one of the exams is to present paper on international social interaction.
I am proficient in three languages and these are Spanish, French and of course English. Though I am equally good in all three, English is the one which I feel more comfortable than other two. I have been teaching English in high school in my area for last two years and also guide the students for international language exam. I am not registered tutor but quite famous in my area and my blogs can be referred for more information.
I like to interact with people having rich cultural background and I feel that none other could be better than India. My uncle lived in India for eight years and told numerous stories about people, back ground, different cultures etc. I can spend around eight weeks for voluntary work as my university holiday starts in April to until 3rd June.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Toto
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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... can be referred for more information. I like to interact with people having ric...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely Toto
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, i feel, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81531531532 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72655019537 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3850195027 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131214224072 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488847498876 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515062695972 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883170324135 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654080218967 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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