Many young people today have their own mobile phone and believe it is essential to their lives. Other people dislike mobile phones and think that they are both a nuisance and an unnecessary luxury item. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these two points of view?
Gadgets have become part of our life, especially mobile phone which revolutionizes the way human communicated in the past. Therefore, people particularly young people consider as necessity rather a device for communication. Nevertheless, there are people who do have affinity towards the mobile phone and believe that mobile phone create disruption in life. I believe that communication is key for humans and mobile phones serves best for this purpose.
On the one hand, mobile phone offers so many advantages to us. Firstly, this device help people to talk even they are on move and availability of mobile network in countries make sure that people can be contacted anywhere in the world. In the past suck kind of facility never existed and people used to face difficulties in interacting with loves ones. Secondly, it is not just a phone now, mobile phone acts like a mini computer and with the use of internet technology it can be used for entertainment, business, education etc. For instance, banks have now started to develop mobile applications for related services and people enjoy the services on the finger tips.
On the other hand, mobile phone causes so many interferences in life. First and foremost, a person can be contacted anytime even out of office hours and such calls create not only disturbance but also increase stress level in person’s life. For example, Government of Germany forbade the business call to individual’s mobile phone after 6:00 PM as such kind of communication reduces happy factors in life. Another issue is about excessive use of mobile phone which causes behavior disorder. Some people use phone for different tasks and become the victim of gadgets and isolate themselves from friends and family members.
To conclude, though mobile phone creates the disturbances for some people, it offers various advantages to individual and business. The way trend is going on, people expect so many advanced smart phones in near future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8303875618 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4871552742 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29859458322 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117882411013 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632579741074 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201562106234 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549904934061 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.