I am writing this letter to participate in Japan children association as a free tutor .I am interested towards teaching. Moreover, that was my ambition from my high school.
Though, I have accomplished English in Delhi, India. Now, i have been working for Microsoft, USA, company . We got vacation on next month for thirty days. So, I wish to do participate in children welfare. Could you please enroll and arrange flight tickets and accommodation for cultural expeditions, when you plan for that tour.
When I was doing university, I had involved in varies social activities and obtain several certificates in may vicinity. In addition, The university presented me good English teacher award 1994. whereas, I got a placement in my university itself and received experience of about 6 years. Simultaneously, I have been working as free lancer for a local newspaper company writing novels and children stories for Comics.
Looking forward to hear from you the positive reply.
Thank you,
Yours faithfully,
Ranjit
Grammar and spelling errors:
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.... Though, I have accomplished English in Delhi, India. Now, i have been workin...
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Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...stories for Comics. Looking forward to hear from you the positive reply. Thank y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you, Yours faithfully, Ranjit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34969325153 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99439293583 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699386503067 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1092864929 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179791093735 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569871488695 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499863310732 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874670227578 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373643928053 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.