Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in good health and sprits .It feel great to receive an invitation from you end to come and stay with you in your native country .Therefore , I would like you to equip me with some information .
Firstly, in an endeavor to make this journey more beautiful and memorable, kindly suggest a present for your family which I can get from my domestic country. Something which they longed to possess. It will be an honor for me to give them their choice.
Moreover, as this is the first time I would be coming to New York and I do not have any other relative/acquaintance, kindly tell me what kind of clothes should I carry? As I foresee, it would be bitter cold there, in that case, should I get pullover and jackets or more heavy woolens .Please let me know the same as I do not want to overload my baggage with unnecessary stuff.
Another area of my interest is to know what events and festivals are prominent at your place. In addition, I would like to see some shows and exhibitions in your vicinity. Last but least, as I am vegetarian, what are the food options available for me? Do I need to carry some packed /ready to cook foods?
I would be glad if you furnish me with your aforementioned details .Eagerly waiting for the prompt reply and thereafter meeting you in person.
Kind regards,
Ranjit
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in good health and sprits .It feel great to receive an invitation from you end to come and stay with you in your native country .Therefore , I would like you to equip me with some information .
Firstly, in an endeavor to make this journey more beautiful and memorable, kindly suggest a present for your family which I can get from my domestic country. Something which they longed to possess. It will be an honor for me to give them their choice.
Moreover, as this is the first time I would be coming to New York and I do not have any other relative/acquaintance, kindly tell me what kind of clothes should I carry? As I foresee, it would be bitter cold there, in that case, should I get pullover and jackets or more heavy woolens .Please let me know the same as I do not want to overload my baggage with unnecessary stuff.
Another area of my interest is to know what events and festivals are prominent at your place. In addition, I would like to see some shows and exhibitions in your vicinity. Last but least, as I am vegetarian, what are the food options available for me? Do I need to carry some packed /ready to cook foods?
I would be glad if you furnish me with your aforementioned details .Eagerly waiting for the prompt reply and thereafter meeting you in person.
Kind regards,
Ranjit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52459016393 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66667906005 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3350083541 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49089527286 0.216113520407 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136437140799 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.244571698285 0.0603063233224 406% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27964689703 0.12726935374 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.308541023074 0.0580467560999 532% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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