You live in a flat and you have a tenancy agreement which states that you must give 3 months notice when you wish to leave. You have paid a deposit of 2 months rent. now a member of you family has a problem and you need to give up your flat and return home as soon has possible. Write a later to your land lady, explain your circumstances, tell her what you intend to do and ask her for special consideration.
Dear Mrs. Parker,
I am writing to inform you that I have to leave the flat due to serious condition in my family.
Yesterday, I got a call from my mother that my father is hospitalized due to serious heart attack. He caught with heart attack previously before 5 years and this is his 2nd heart attack. it is obvious that my family, in Mumbai, are very much in tense and are worried about his condition and so do I. Hence, I decided to return back to my native place soon possible.
due to my career growth, I came here to do job in Multinational Company, but it seems I have to leave this city so that I can take care of my family and support them in this critical situation. I would request you to accept my short period notice of leaving your apartment.
As per the agreement, I paid you 2 months' advance deposit which will void if I am failed to give you 3 months of notice. would you please consider my humble request to return my 2 months' deposit so that I can utilize those money in treatment of my father?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Chintan Rathod
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...years and this is his 2nd heart attack. it is obvious that my family, in Mumbai, a...
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Line 13, column 321, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...dition and so do I. Hence, I decided to return back to my native place soon possible. ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...my native place soon possible. due to my career growth, I came here to do ...
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Line 25, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
... failed to give you 3 months of notice. would you please consider my humble request t...
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Line 25, column 218, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
... 2 months deposit so that I can utilize those money in treatment of my father? I lo...
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Line 37, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you. Yours sincerely, Chintan Rathod
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53883495146 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42840745887 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2271102873 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26462065124 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106491462562 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130714480804 0.0603063233224 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184901592224 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119281855133 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.