Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate. I am Nancy who lives in 313 room. In particular, I am really fed up with such an inconsiderate girl.
As a matter of fact, all the times when I am going to study, I am disturbed by her because of having her friends invited over for dinner every nigh. In addition, she really doses not any care about my possesses. In other word, she picks my personal things without getting permission. For example, last night when I was trying to find my calculator and I was totally disappointed with that, all of a sudden, I saw it at her cupboard.
I am going to ask you for a one_bed room in next semester which seems more convenient to me. you would be so nice if you could give your immediate attention to this matter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
F. BAGHERI.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to express my dissatisfacti...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmate. I am Nancy who live in 313 room. I am really fed up with such an inconside...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doses'.
Suggestion: doses
...ner every nigh. In addition, she really dose not any care about my possesses. In oth...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cupboard. I am going to ask you for a one_bed room in next semester which see...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... immediate attention to this matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, as to, for example, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50318471338 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7045999045 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707006369427 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9700300949 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2727272727 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196537353068 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790671126548 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526857792949 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122289229557 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062397491727 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.