You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am a resident of room number 151, Hostel number 6, North Campus. I have been staying in allotted room since beginning of semester. I share my room with Rohit Sharma, a mechanical student. He is very joyful and fun loving person. We have nice time together during the semester. But, he has never been quite much fond of studying. He likes to play laud music inside the room, which has always been a distraction factor for my studies.
However, I never raised a flag during the semester, but, considering upcoming exam in next two weeks, such behavior hampers much academic performance. Firstly, I tried to have a discussion with him around the table following by extending helping hand to him in his studies. Since, my efforts could not materialize, I opted to switch the room to have amicable and respectful separation.
Considering, my pre-dominate requirement is a place, wherein, I can concentrate on my studies, I request you to shift to another room with someone from the similar trade course. Another room from this same hostel will be highly preferable for the sake of convenient in commutation to classroom.
I shall look forward to hear from your positively.
Yours’ sincerely
Gurmeet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ion to classroom. I shall look forward to hear from your positively. Yours’ sincerely...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Yours
... forward to hear from your positively. Yours’ sincerely Gurmeet Singh
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97073170732 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79550927381 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9895573461 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7857142857 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127082623017 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386840226041 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479803412483 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649013011222 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519840197305 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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