Dear sir,
I am one of the residents of the Oxford hostel, on Kings Street, who is penning down this letter with regards to the room that I got a month ago.
I was allotted this room on 28th October and got to know later that I would be sharing it with another student. At first, it was exciting, but not anymore as my roommate is an undergraduate student while I am a graduate trainee. The schedule of courses and part-time jobs is totally opposite, thereby causing a lot of difficulties as he usually come at midnight from his work due to which I get disturbed consequently affecting my studies. Moreover, I have a habit of reading aloud which is an issue for him.
It would be great, if you can shift me in a room without any roommate. I am fine to pay more for such kind of room as I am very passionate about my studies and want to excel in this field. What is more, a room in new dormitory will be preferred as all my classmates are in that hostel through which it will be easier for me to get involved in group discussions.
I hope you can find me a new competition at the earliest as exams are coming pretty soon.
Thanking you in anticipation and.
Yours faithfully
Harshdeep Kaur.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, kind of, of course, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38666666667 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6344123434 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5177424816 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224092713927 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798633948533 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460401633199 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119121774945 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148495401997 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.