Dear Mr. Barboza,
I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction in the room provided to me which I share with Ms. Racheal. My room number is 425 in the first floor of Building no. B.
The problem is that my roommate is a very social person, which means that there are people coming over to our room at all times. This creates a disturbance as I try to concentrate on my studies. Moreover, there are constant parties and loud music in the room. Additionally, she sometimes has a friend stay over at night, which makes me uncomfortable.
I am a very reserved person and my aim at this university is to score the highest marks possible in my capacity to land my dream job. However, all this disturbance is putting a halt to my attempts at getting good marks. With so much noise around, I am not able to complete my work on time nor am I able to get a good night's rest.
I request you to kindly arrange an individual room for me. I am willing to pay the extra rent as I do not see myself sharing a room with anyone else. This would give me space to concentrate on my oncoming exams.
I hope you could arrange this at the earliest possible. Awaiting your response on the same.
Yours Sincerely,
Malita Dsouza
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same. Yours Sincerely, Malita Dsouza
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45175438596 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61445819607 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3806526597 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229165774836 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740015995823 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627360716404 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138180552666 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326350912962 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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