You live at university accommodation. You found that some valuables were stolen from your room. Write a letter to accommodation manager about this theft. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Describe what happened
• Write what you want from the accommodation manager
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am international student of business administration final year at your prestigious university and presently accommodating at hall of residence on campus. This epistle is being written to report the robbery which took place yesterday night around 11’o clock.
Last night, I and my roommate, Andrew lee, were doing rehearsals for the youth festival which is going to held on 7th march, 2020. When we came back around 12p.m, we sensed something fishy. To our utter shock, we realized that some expensive items are not there in the locker and it was broken. The stolen items include golden jewellery that I was supposed to wear on upcoming fest, $10000 cash and one laptop of apple brand. We have put forward this theft to the housekeeping department but they act as ignorant in our case.
I solicit you to please look into this matter at the earliest. I would appreciate if you could provide assistance in locating our belongings. I think looking into the cctv footage could give us the evidence of the person who stole these things.
I expect you will help me to get my things back as soon as possible and thank you in advance for considering my matter.
Yours sincerely,
Peter Lee
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
... to report the robbery which took place yesterday night around 11'o clock. Last night, I...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...or the youth festival which is going to held on 7th march, 2020. When we came back a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'march 2020'.
Suggestion: march 2020
... festival which is going to held on 7th march, 2020. When we came back around 12p.m, we sen...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... assistance in locating our belongings. I think looking into the cctv footage cou...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f the person who stole these things. I expect you will help me to get my thing...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85576923077 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63162642777 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721153846154 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8837324877 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160161257172 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517978610238 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454800594985 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085890309751 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271972848903 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.