You lost something and someone found it and sent it you Writing a letter to that person Thanking the person Explain how you must have lost it Explain what was there in it and why it was important to you

Essay topics:

You lost something and someone found it and sent it you. Writing a letter to that person
Thanking the person
Explain how you must have lost it
Explain what was there in it and why it was important to you

Dear Vishal,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health. The reason behind this letter is to thank you for returning my backpack which i have received today.
Actually, last week, I was going back to home after a busy day at work. It was a hectic and tiring day which made me feel sick and exhausted. I had no idea, when did I forget my bag in the subway and after reaching home, I realized that I lost my bag. Even, I informed to Toronto transit department about it. It was my fortune that you found it and delivered it on my address after seeing my driving license in it.
There were so many important documents including my passport and health card. My chef uniform and knife kit were also inside the backpack. Your Favour cannot be thanked and returned but let me know if I can do for you. My contact no is 6478038935.
Yours sincerely,
Mohna

Votes
Average: 8.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...me know if I can do for you. My contact no is 6478038935. Yours sincerely, Mohna...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32594066992 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0250947271 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186523377366 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612332259018 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624002578685 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137865752832 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583101377556 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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