You lost something and someone found it and sent it to you Writing a letter to that person Thanking the person Explain how you must have lost it Explain what was there in it Why it was important to you

Essay topics:

You lost something and someone found it and sent it to you. Writing a letter to that person - Thanking the person –

• Explain how you must have lost it

• Explain what was there in it

• Why it was important to you

Dear John,

Hope you are doing great! I am extremely obliged to you in return of my lost valuables.

Last week, I visited Valencia City in order to discuss business development strategies with the client at the Starbucks cafe. I took out the laptop and other stuffs from my backpack. After the conference, both of us left the place to our respective destinations. After reaching home, I realized that personal pouch is missing and suspected that, it was forgotten by me at the café.

The pouch contained a hard drive with all confidential data, Identification proofs as well as card holder with credit and debit cards. Among all these the storage device was the most important one which I was worried much.

The solid state drive was stored with secret information about business strategies, unique sales points as well as other important documents. This data is crucial for us and if it goes in to wrong hand could create a breach in our business strategies and plans.

With immense pleasure, I would like to thank you again for returning the precious stuffs. Your helping hand saved me from the future consequences.

God bless you,

Regards,

Sd-/

Name

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope you are doing great! I am extremely...
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Line 19, column 91, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...gain for returning the precious stuffs. Your helping hand saved me from the future c...
^^^^
Line 27, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ences. God bless you, Regards, Sd-/ Name
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08629441624 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65258420085 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690355329949 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6281460969 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194464534981 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628065942294 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738458619425 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09991900242 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783411795791 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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