Some people thinks that it is necessary to use animal for testing medicines intended for human use, others however think it is cruel to do that. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Medicines are an important necessity for humans. Many people believe that drugs must be undergone preclinical studies in animals rather than testing directly in humans. However, some heads are on the opinion that testing drugs on species other than human are cruel. Hence, both the views have to be dwelled to rationalise my opinion.
On the one hand, newly developed medications must be tested on animals to understand the drug behave in our body as well as adverse events caused by the drug. The physiology of animals are closely related to humans and any new chemical entity must be studied firstly on animals rather than testing on humans directly to understand the behaviour of the medicine. To clarify, a novel cancer medication intended for human used must be experimented on non-human subjects to understand the target identification and safety panel on the drug and the good drug candidates will be moved further for clinical studies in human volunteers. Overlooking in to the safety and efficacious treatment, animal studies are crucial in determining the fate of medicines meant for human use.
On the other hand, some people argue that drug testing on animal are cruel in nature. Many of the labs worldwide uses animals and a large number of animal are sacrificed their lives after the testing of drugs and also the procedures are in human across the globe. To add more proof, a group of animals which under goes experimental studies suffer from severe pain and stress which is not accounted when compared to human. These animal will be euthanized after each study and a large number of non-human species are killed worldwide for the betterment of mankind which is considered as a cruelty towards them
In short, although some people contradict the testing of medicine experiment on animals, this essay opine that, it is mandatory to do preclinical testing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, well, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07741935484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64811793847 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5694574512 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315367350161 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133263248246 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599534001272 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200529811128 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219815439888 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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