Some say that children must spend more time on working on school projects from an early age. Others believe that children must spend more time on playing and have less stress at school. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.
There is a group of people are on the opinion that children should concentrate more on school projects from early childhood. Regardless of this, there is yet another school of thought that children must focus on playing games and have less stress at educational institution. However, both the perspectives have to be dwelled upon to reach an opinion.
On the one hand, the face of educational systems tends to change in a time dependent manner. Institution design their syllabus with more practical oriented coursework in order to develop the skills and abilities of the children. To clarify further, introduction of projects and other learning activities in the lessons would engage the student in boosting their ability to think as well as subject knowledge by conducting projects, seminars and curricular exhibitions. These activities would provide an upper hand to the young students to enhance the acquired skill sets.
On the other hand, some believe that, vigorous activities at schools from the first phase of education negatively impact the mental development of the scholar. Children should be allowed to engage in extracurricular activities after school hours which would help them to gain mental and physical health as well as stress less days at school. To prove further, in olden days primary students were set free from exams and projects in the view that early childhood is the time were children develops excellent intellectual and physical health. Countries like Japan, China are still following this exercise to keep up the children away from hectic school days.
In conclusion, spending more time on project work during early school days could develop pressure among the students and would be an overburden in the blooming stage of children. Hence, children must be provided with adequate time to engage in games and other extracurricular activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3389261745 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76393570299 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1840417973 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428551847912 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141958208402 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866091200346 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26649163379 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11343150231 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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