Dear Sir,
I ordered a Dell laptop from your website which was delivered yesterday. However, I was dissatisfied because the product I received was damaged and not as per my specifications. Therefore, I am writing this letter to inform you that the product which I purchased from your website was not promised as mentioned on your website as per the black Friday deals.
I placed an order for a Dell Laptop model XX05 with the specifications that include 8 Gigabytes RAM, 1 Terabyte hard disk, and Intel i5 7th generation processor.
Unfortunately, I received an opened sealed package from your delivery man. Besides, the display screen of the laptop was broken. Although the laptop is working fine as I switch on the laptop, the device is useless unless the screen is not fixed. Plus, I ordered the pale grey skin color of the laptop. Though, I received light blue skin.
I would request you to kindly replaced the damaged product with the mentioned details above that I placed an order from your company’s online portal on the last black Friday. Moreover, please ensure that in the future no other customer would encounter this issue.
I am looking forward to hearing a prompt response from your end.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...dvertisement for volunteers in upcoming sports event which will be soon going to organ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'organize'
Suggestion: organize
...ports event which will be soon going to organized by you charitable organization. I w...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14201183432 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11695622794 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4836742282 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789672412877 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298804509976 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376206132038 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477231643513 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361142027644 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.