You ordered an equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company about these details and write what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the order #23568CH. I bought a smart watch in your online store yesterday. The watch has many interesting features and the most value from my point of view is the possibility to measure heart rates during intensive training. Yesterday, when I receive my order it seemed that everything was working perfectly. However, this morning I’ve had an interval training and discovered that heart rate measurements do not work in the watch. To be honest, I was highly disappointed as I am preparing for the Ironmen race and I need to fix my readings for analysis.
As I am aware, you did not have the same watch at your store because I received a discount for purchasing the last one. That’s I would appreciate it, if you suggest something similar at a comparable price and change the watch I’ve bought on a working one.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.
Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76154834647 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5855187764 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149333446399 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561144671825 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419847213803 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886569797509 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326434727308 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.