you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man

Essay topics:

you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this to complaint about delay of sending my cheque book from your bank. I have been waiting for it in the last 2 weeks, but it is not in to my hands till now. As I am regular customer of your bank and I am using your bank services for 2 years but, never it happened delay of any service. This time the cheque book is bit urgent to me but due to irresponsible service of your employee’s I was answerable to my house owner as I have to pay him rent of this month through cheque. I was very upset with your bank service this time. I have applied for new cheque book 15 before and while requesting they said it will be delivered within 3 days but not yet received. They are even talking irresponsible while calling to the branch. I want to know still how many days it takes to get delivered. Also, this kind of action actually give a bad remark to your bank and people like me will not prefer to utilise your services. Further, it would be appraised if you take appropriate action regarding this so as to not repeat this kind of bad behaviour again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to complaint about del...
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Line 2, column 1006, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... take appropriate action regarding this so as to not repeat this kind of bad behaviour a...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Abc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, while, as to, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28959276018 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40162820223 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1854358585 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266865591387 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09510097724 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580137549993 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186365241502 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466698787925 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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