You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complaint about your poor bank services. The particular problem I am focusing here is regarding your staff communication and dispatch services of your bank.
I had ordered a new cheque book from State Bank on 23rd January by filling up the online form avaliable on your bank mobile app. I also received an assuring e-mail regarding the process. It has been two weeks but I still have not received anything. I tried to reach out to the bank officials to inquire regarding the delay and to my dismay all the attempts to gain the information pertaining to this matter were unfruitful.
Therefore, I was hoping to get a response from you and a speific timeline as to how much time will the bank take to provide me the new cheque book as I have some important settlements to clear. Meanwhile, I would like suggest you to train your staff to treat the customers with some politeness and ask them to focus more on their work to avoid such inconvenience faced by the clients.
Yours truly,
Rachana Gohel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68108108108 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61933028872 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2427868686 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337490020791 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108635352457 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830187739503 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190881694995 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653107375421 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.