You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Hello sir,
Purpose: To make an inquiry about the cheque book which is not received yet.
My home branch is Scotiabank, newton, Surrey. This is not the first time that my order got delayed. Two months ago, I made a request for my bank statement via mail within 14 business days, but I got that in 28 business days. This result of this was that my Visa for USA got rejected. Two weeks ago, on 26th of July I ordered a new check book on a phone call with customer care representative because I lost my previous one, but I have not got it yet. He gave me the assurance that I will have my cheque book via mail within 7 business days,but I have not got one.
I have my own business and many workers are working under me. The result of delay is that they are waiting for their salaries and one of my worker even left the job because he thinks that I am a bankrupt.Could you please let me know that when exactly I will receive my order so that I can release salaries to my employees. Also, I am keen to know that is their any policy or actions you take when such delays happen.
Eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully August 11, 2020
Rupinder Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...que book via mail within 7 business days,but I have not got one. I have my own busi...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Could
... because he thinks that I am a bankrupt.Could you please let me know that when exactl...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for your response. Yours faithfully August 11, 2020 Rupinder Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24774774775 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31468863114 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3602464747 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207734607377 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717353822396 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519218238289 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100612977026 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450103513201 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.