You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the table lamp of ancient times that I am willing to sell at your shop.
To begin with, please allow me to explain you how I came across your shop. As I am a great lover of collecting old coins, while surfing on internet I found the name of your shop. In fact, I was fascinated by the photo gallery available online. With the advancement of technology, it has now become easy to check the authenticity. Additionally, I enquired about your place in Google listing and found to be legitimate
As for the item, it is the 18th century lantern, 3 feet in height and is made up of copper that is joint to a brown wooden table. Above all, its incredible dazzling stone engraved on its body gives twinkling light when gets lighted. Not only it gives beautiful light but also it gives fantastic look when placed at the corner of the room. Also, the maintenance of the light has been kept on regular basis.
Besides, I am anxious to sell this lamp in not less than 2 lakhs rupees. I find the selling price worth it because of its existence till date.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, then, while, as for, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46759259259 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43769674033 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.79187205 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2307692308 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192126846554 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575393424516 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062716169257 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101054556136 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475804992816 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.